Thursday, September 18, 2014

Journal 11

        Lauren woke late one morning and she knew if she didn't get to school on time she would get another detention. Lauren thought "What is quickest way to school?" and then it came to her. The dark forest, every abhor the Dark forest but Lauren knew she had to risk it. She started walking when she saw this creature, it was the size of a bunny but on its head there were antennas but on the antennas were eyeballs. Lauren picked up the creature and studied it Lauren thought it seemed nice and cute so she dug a hole in the ground and placed it there. When school was over Lauren decided to go see if the creature was still in the hole. When Lauren got there the creature wasn't there anymore Lauren was sure that she left him here. Lauren goes home and goes into her room and lying on the bed was this creature and Lauren decides that she's going to keep this male creature that she named Hans.

2 comments:

  1. That was good lol funny how you put the creature had antennas.

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  2. It was good I liked it, I don't really see anything wrong with it.

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